Lance,
> Only one nitpick. In the features section, we twice say the feature is for 8.1. That seems implied to me. I recommend dropping the clause "for 8.1" in "the buffer manager for 8.1 has..." and "in version 8.1," in "in version 8.1, the query planner is ..."
>
OK, I'll take a look. I'm a little more concerned about the fact that
I use the words "enhanced" and "improved" at least 6 times each, and
"refactored" twice. Bonus points for anyone who can find ways to
replace some of these!
Also, Lance, I thought I had an "about Pervasive" on file, but I don't
seem to. Can you get me the 4 line version? Thanks!
--Josh