Release, 3rd draft

From: Josh Berkus <josh(at)agliodbs(dot)com>
To: PostgreSQL advocacy <pgsql-advocacy(at)postgresql(dot)org>
Subject: Release, 3rd draft
Date: 2005-10-03 19:01:40
Message-ID: 200510031201.40772.josh@agliodbs.com
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Folks,

Please take a look at the current draft, (both in docs and in CVS). I've
made a few changes:

1) Added a summary paragraph per Lance's suggestion. I merged it with the
1st paragraph and re-wrote the 2nd so that it flows.

2) Lance, I still need a title for you. What are you, R&D director? What?

3) I replaced the "these are the features" sentences with sub-headers.
Those sentences seemed redundant with the summary para.

4) After some reflection, I cut the stuff with OSDL. It's too much. We
mention 8-way and 16-way machines up above. If we really want the OSDL
stuff, then I'd say cut Merlin's quote and get one from Mark Wong.

Comments?

--
--Josh

Josh Berkus
Aglio Database Solutions
San Francisco

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