Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release

[Lukas Kahwe Smith <smith(at)pooteeweet(dot)org>]

Josh Berkus schrieb:
> Folks,
>
> .... is in Press CVS:
> http://pgfoundry.org/scm/?group_id=1000047
>
> or in Docs for those of you who don't have CVS access to the Press project:
> http://pgfoundry.org/docman/view.php/1000047/233/first_draft.txt
>
> Your contributions to making it a good release are very appreciated.  
> Please read the notes at the top of the draft *before* commenting.
>
> Particularly, I'm looking for help on the best quotes for the release.  
> Bruce, you willing to own something like the quote I attribute to you?  If 
> so, how would you re-write it?

"PostgreSQL is also the first database to offer and early implementation 
this radically new join algorithm valuable for data mining and 
consolidation."

this sentence is bumpy .. "and" => "an" "this" => "of this"

not sure if its common to address readers with "you" in press releases.

regards,
Lukas